Vow

Grand Prize Winner

by Susan Alexander Derrera

In the glare of the headlights your pale hand hovers over the black engine. It is dead and I am here to help you. Snow falls in icy sheets as you connect the cables, the steely teeth. During the dry season, the plumeria tree is bare, leafless, but from the gnarled tips of its fleshy branches explode creamy white flowers, still, their fragrance decanted to a beach one night where we are making love. How long had we been married then? When we rose on that cloud of scent raw and giddy, my sandals were gone -- lapped up and away like two bright hopes until you splashed in and scooped them in your love-stained hands. The engine bears down now giving itself over, over over to the other until it catches. I roll down the window and yell, Are we OK? my breath a vapor flower, and you streaked in sleet, the jaws hanging loose in your hand, nod. Just in case, you call out, grounded by our years, follow me. Winner, College Poetry

Cabin on Alaska lake

Creative Writing Contest

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